«Some people think that governments should spend more money on sports facilities for top athletes. Others argue that this money should be spent for sports facilities for ordinary people. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.»

In the contemporary world, many
people
believe that governments should
spent
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more
money
on
sports
facilities
but other
people
this
money
should be spent
for
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on
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sport
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facilities
for ordinary
people
. I believe that the government should spend
money
to improve their sporting
facilities
because
athletes
provide financial support to the government. In
this
essey
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essay
, I shall discuss both sides and provide reasons for my point of view. Obviously,
athletes
represent their country
on
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a variety of countries.
Sports
must engage rigorous training and specialized equipment.
Moreover
, sometimes
athletes
are funded by the governments. Government should
spent
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a lot of
money
for
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on
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sports
because
athletes
are changing our country. If governments provide
athletes
with luxury
sport
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facilities
it will help them gain a reputation and fame in the world.
On the other hand
, there are some reasons to invest
sports
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in sports
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facilities
for ordinary
people
as well. Others believe that
sports
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the sports
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budget not for
athletes
but
sport
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sports
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equipments
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equipment
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are should
bought
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for society.
This
means that it is very important to build places where
people
can go to
fitnes
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fitness
and
physical
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do physical
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activities. To conclude.
Sport
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facilities
are very significant for both
athletes
and ordinary
people
because they help them exercise and
physically
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be physically
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active.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • elite sports facilities
  • national pride
  • international events
  • participation
  • high-quality
  • performance
  • national representation
  • fairness
  • social issues
  • population health
  • well-being
  • accessible
  • inclusive
  • community involvement
  • sponsorship
  • endorsements
  • recreational facilities
  • inspire
  • younger generations
  • serious pursuit
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