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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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A lot of debate is in vogue that staying in big
cities
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 may have repercussions on
health
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. I strongly disagree with the statement as living in big
cities
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 would
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 give you an opportunity to have more access to better
health
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facilities
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. usually, small towns lack advanced level medical
facilities
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 and people have to commute to urban areas which can risk their
health
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. metropolitan
cities
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,
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, provide multiple and more nearby access to medical
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. Meanwhile, better public transport is
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 another important factor that differentiates the characteristics of both livings. in case of an emergency, hospitals and some other social organisations are providing ambulance
facilities
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 with basic medication while travelling to the hospital. It
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 shrinks the chances of losing a
life
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 which is not possible to avail in small towns. another important factor is the social
life
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 of big
cities
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. Being part of that circle gives a break from a hectic and stressful
life
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 to enjoy the luxuries of big
cities
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. there are some studies that conclude that spending spare time with a friend can boost the energy level and make people happier. there are a lot of opportunities to explore and enjoy the nightlife of the urban areas. It not only refreshes our
mind
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 but
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 gives an exposure to different cultures.
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 may have a positive impact on the
health
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 of a person. In conclusion. Living in large
cities
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 provides better
health
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facilities
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 and opportunities to expand the social circle which can expand healthy activities and
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 improved the living
life
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