You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

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Dear Sir, I am Jack and I leave

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to your restaurant, I want to complain to you regarding the disturbance I am facing every day from your restaurant and I want you to look on

this

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issue. I am unable to complete my studies in the evening hours due to the high noise of music that will come from your restaurant every day and it is making my task difficult every time. I have already informed your manager regarding

this

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but no action took place yet. I would suggest if you shift all your music programs on the weekend

instead

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of weekdays

then

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it will not only help me, but

also

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it can be helpful for many neighbours. I hope you will solve

this

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issue by following up on

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letter because it is getting hard for me to manage my studies. If the issue does not solve

then

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I will inform the police about it. I am hoping for a positive step from your end. Yours Truly Jack

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

170 words

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