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Subjects like arts, music, and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

#subjects #arts #music #drama #school #time #calendar
Besides
 my academic and professional
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, I
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 love painting and have actively participated in most
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the art workshops.
This
 has served as an excellent stress buster for me over the years from my sedentary lifestyle. I have conducted numerous crash course camps for kids to teach them the art of drawing. These creative skills have imbibed a sense of proactiveness in me and apply a thoughtful approach to any task I accomplish. There are several
business
 sectors where
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 volume of
data
 plays a vital role in planning, building strategies
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 developing
business
 prospects and
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 the critical decision-making process.
Data
 analytics serves the purpose of achieving qualitative and quantitative techniques and processes used to enhance productivity and
business
 gain. With the urge
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 utilising my logical mind and the gained practical experience, now I assert that I am in a position to delve into the realm of higher studies. The course subjects involved at your university would help me to effectively understand the mathematical and computational aspects using big
data
 tools.
This
 curriculum is exactly what I require to
further
 amplify my knowledge of cloud-based approaches. After graduating from your university, I strongly assert that I would be well prepared to ride the wave of industrial progress in my home country. My current journey has provided me
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 exposure to understanding
business
 requirements, appropriate decision making, leading a team and providing the finest solutions to the client, and being an active contributing professional. Today though I lack the advanced knowledge in the field of
Data
 Analytics, which I believe will be gained after the completion of
this
 course and allow me to reach the pinnacle of success. I come to you with a desire to gain knowledge to help me turn my dreams into reality.
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