Subjects like arts, music, and drama are more important than other school subjects and therefore should be given more time in the calendar. Do you agree or disagree?

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the art workshops.

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utilising my logical mind and the gained practical experience, now I assert that I am in a position to delve into the realm of higher studies. The course subjects involved at your university would help me to effectively understand the mathematical and computational aspects using big

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