Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

an increasingly advanced, and developed society

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leads to problems affecting the environment due to industrial

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, dust from motorbikes, cars, and human

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leading to many

environment

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problems

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as climate change, ozone depletion, marine environment

pollution

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, and especially the disappearance of several

plants

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and

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species important to human life.

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I agree it is a serious problem, I still think that our Earth has more than many issues to worry

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on the one hand, there are many reasons why

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the loss

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of

animals

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and

plants

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is a matter of concern today.

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, it must be mentioned that

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's awareness and greed for forest protection. some

people

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from ethnic minorities are still not aware that it is illegal to cut down

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the forest

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forest

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forests

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and hunt

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.

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, some

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know that but still do to sell for money.

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, climate change, specifically global

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warning

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warming

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also

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a reason

why

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for why

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disappearance

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some

plants

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and

animals

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. Melting ice causes sea levels to rise more and more, causing

tsunami

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tsunamis

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or hot weather, causing wildfires everywhere in the world, which makes it difficult for

animals

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to find places to live and

source

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of food.

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support the view that there are more pressing environmental issues that need attention; specifically here is

water

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pollution

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including domestic

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and seawater, ponds, and rivers. the main cause of

water

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pollution

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is due to human activities

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as domestic

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, medical

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from

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living near the sea, or rivers that are not treated but directly thrown into the

water

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. more toxic is

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from factories and enterprises, which not only causes serious

water

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pollution

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but

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affects human health. more specifically, may increase the risk of cancers, miscarriages, and birth defects. in summary,

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the disappearance of

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and

animals

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species is a serious problem, I still think that there are many environmental issues that are of concern today.