Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
an increasingly advanced, and developed society
also
leads to problems affecting the environment due to industrial waste
, dust from motorbikes, cars, and human waste
leading to many environment
problems Replace the word
environmental
such
as climate change, ozone depletion, marine environment pollution
, and especially the disappearance of several plants
and animals
species important to human life. Although
I agree it is a serious problem, I still think that our Earth has more than many issues to worry.
on the one hand, there are many reasons why Change preposition
about.
loss
of Add an article
the loss
animals
and plants
is a matter of concern today. first
, it must be mentioned that people
's awareness and greed for forest protection. some people
from ethnic minorities are still not aware that it is illegal to cut down Add an article
the forest
a forest
forest
and hunt Fix the agreement mistake
forests
animals
. besides
, some people
know that but still do to sell for money. moreover
, climate change, specifically global Correct your spelling
warming
warning
, Correct your spelling
warming
also
a reason Add a missing verb
is also
why
disappearance Change preposition
for why
or
some Correct your spelling
of
plants
and animals
. Melting ice causes sea levels to rise more and more, causing tsunami
or hot weather, causing wildfires everywhere in the world, which makes it difficult for Fix the agreement mistake
tsunamis
animals
to find places to live and source
of food.
Fix the agreement mistake
sources
on the other hand
, i
support the view that there are more pressing environmental issues that need attention; specifically here is Change the capitalization
I
water
pollution
including domestic water
and seawater, ponds, and rivers. the main cause of water
pollution
is due to human activities such
as domestic waste
, medical waste
from people
living near the sea, or rivers that are not treated but directly thrown into the water
. more toxic is waste
from factories and enterprises, which not only causes serious water
pollution
but also
affects human health. more specifically, may increase the risk of cancers, miscarriages, and birth defects.
in summary, although
the disappearance of plants
and animals
species is a serious problem, I still think that there are many environmental issues that are of concern today.Submitted by trankhanhnhi on
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