Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In

this

presentday

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present day

society , there has been much discussion about the construction of

cities

. Some people see that towns should be beautifully built , while others present they should be constructed functionally.

This

debated issue has ignited

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public attention from time to time. In

this

essay , different views on that matter will be discussed in the following paragraphs , and

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my humble opinion will be followed

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. On the one hand , it can be obviously seen that beautiful

cities

can bring a vast number of benefits to the country.

First

of all , being famous for their beauty can enhance the tourist attraction which can lead to earning a large amount of foreign income .

In addition

, an aesthetically-pleasing

city

is the main feature of the country.

For example

, as Indonesia is widely well-known for its appealing

city

, Bali , there is an increasing number of foreigners

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there annually.

Therefore

, beautiful

cities

could likely

to

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have an upper hand , and the results are undeniably impressive.

Nevertheless

, other proponents who adopt a feasible approach assert that basically ,

cities

must be designed in a functional way.

Likewise

, the country’s overall development is highly dependable on its own infrastructure

such

as

an

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ease of transportation , having quality health care services and

higher

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standard of living.

Accordingly

,

city

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council should prioritize

first

to fill the gap

of

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citizens’ needs. Having both sides of the

arguments

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considered,

although

stunning

cities

help in earning

for

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foreign money , the functionality is the basic ground factor for a nation. What I passionately believe is that if the

city

was practically structured , it can

consequently

uplift the whole nation ‘s advancement.