Some feel that cities should be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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society , there has been much discussion about the construction of

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. Some people see that towns should be beautifully built , while others present they should be constructed functionally.

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public attention from time to time. In

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essay , different views on that matter will be discussed in the following paragraphs , and

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. On the one hand , it can be obviously seen that beautiful

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can bring a vast number of benefits to the country.

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of all , being famous for their beauty can enhance the tourist attraction which can lead to earning a large amount of foreign income .

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, an aesthetically-pleasing

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is the main feature of the country.

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, as Indonesia is widely well-known for its appealing

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, Bali , there is an increasing number of foreigners

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there annually.

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, beautiful

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could likely

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have an upper hand , and the results are undeniably impressive.

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, other proponents who adopt a feasible approach assert that basically ,

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must be designed in a functional way.

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, the country’s overall development is highly dependable on its own infrastructure

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ease of transportation , having quality health care services and

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standard of living.

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council should prioritize

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to fill the gap

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citizens’ needs. Having both sides of the

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considered,

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stunning

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help in earning

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foreign money , the functionality is the basic ground factor for a nation. What I passionately believe is that if the

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was practically structured , it can

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uplift the whole nation ‘s advancement.