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There are many extinct animal species in the world. Some people think we should protect animals from dying out, while others believe we should spend more time on problems of human beings. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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As evolution takes place
animals
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 are evolving as well, and some species die and never resurface the earth again. It is argued that
animals
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 should be protected from going into extinction, while some schools of thought believe there are more pressing issues affecting human beings which should be looked after
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 as jobs and security .In
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 essay, I will be discussing both views but I am of the opinion that problems associated with humans should be looked into
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 of
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 extinction.
Animals
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 are beautiful creatures created for beautiful nature. Due to revolutionary ,theories most of them will die and never exist again.
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, the effect of human efforts can help in preventing of extinction of
animals
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.
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, if hunters stop going into the forest to hunt wild
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 for food it will help in the preservation of
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animals
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such
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 as bears, kangaroos etc. The preservation of
animals
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 helps to build the ecosystem.
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,
people
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 are facing more pressing issues relating to their survival as living beings. Problems
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 as job and security are part of the problems associated with
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.
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 of thinking of
animals
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 provision of trade for
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 to venture into, looking out for
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 by making the environment safe is of utmost importance.
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, a career
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 as farming can help In the provision of food for the family and the government making sure the environment is safe to live in will greatly increase the living condition of
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. In conclusion,
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 humans can contribute to the preservation of
animals
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, providing good work and adequate security will be appreciated by
people
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 because it solves their immediate and family need.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • poaching
  • extinction
  • ecosystem
  • medicine
  • agriculture
  • cascading effect
  • food chain
  • survival
  • resources
  • prioritized
  • healthcare
  • education
  • poverty alleviation
  • sustainable practices
  • root causes
  • climate change
  • recovery
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