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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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In many homelands, teaching institutions are facing serial issues due to student's
act
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. In
this
 essay, I will explore the reason
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this
 problem regarding their ages and
tendences
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tendencies
.
Secondly
, I will discuss possible solutions as well as measures that can be taken in order to reduce
this
 behaviour.
To begin
 with, teenagers are more tent to have wrong thoughts in their minds as they are not able to fix problems as adults do.
Moreover
, young people do not have
the
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enough ability to understand
either
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 something is right or now.
For instance
, they might easily have an opinion about something which brings a quick action that they would regret if they were older.
Furthermore
, it is not difficult for kids to be influenced by their environment since they are not good at making logical decisions.
On the other hand
, there may be some options to solve
this
 problem if it is tackled with a serious attitude
such
 as
to encourage
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 them to be more talkative and open about their thoughts or issues.
For example
, all of the students should be able to feel comfortable
on
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explaining their feelings to at least one mentor at school.
Moreover
, families have to be aware of the responsibilities that they have against young people
such
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 them
a
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peaceful environment to grow. To sum up, there might be critical problems with
student's
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students'
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 behaviour at school as well as at their home, but it is
also
 possible to apply the solutions that I mention above to reduce
this
 inconvenience.
Submitted by berktansuker1998 on

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