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What are the causes of water shortage? How should the natural resources be preserved and utilized.

#water #shortage #resources
The
problem
 of
water
 shortage which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is hazardous while others reject
this
 notion. The substantial influence of
this
 trend has sparked
the
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controversy over
the
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 potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the shortage of
water
 as a natural resource is a great
problem
. There are myriad
of
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reasons which will
further
 explain
this
 argument but the most preponderance stems from the fact is that overpopulation leads to migration and urbanisation which result in creating imbalance and scarcity of resources. Another pivotal aspect is that
mixture
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 of pollution causes global warming which leads
natural
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 disasters like floods,
drought
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 and under
such
 conditions there is no
water
.
Hence
, it is apparent that
water
 shortage is a global threat. Steps to deal with
this
problem
 are many but
most
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 significant ones are not complicated but acceptable and practical.
Besides
this
, there should be recycling of
water
 and even
rain
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water
 harvesting is very helpful in storing fresh
water
. Primarily, afforestation reduces pollution and maintains
water
 cycles.
Moreover
, strict laws should be made against pollution. To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach
to
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a conclusion that the
problem
 of
water
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 crisis can be successfully addressed, provided that the
above stated
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 measures are taken.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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