In your own opinion, what do you think are the factors that contribute to longevity?

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Longevity is a dream for all
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, is not it? but , how to get it and what the factors may help .
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paragraphs, I would like to write about my view and little experience in longevity.
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very clear that most
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if not all of them want to live for
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time , of course with good health and feeling safe. In my opinion,
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not impossible to live
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time if
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follow the
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like, doing
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diet and
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the tension.
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, some researchers
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any technology just limited kind of food and a lot of walking .In
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life but, there are steps
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matter.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • longevity
  • factor
  • contribute
  • healthy lifestyle choices
  • genetics
  • access to quality healthcare
  • social connections
  • support
  • education
  • economic stability
  • environmental factors
  • stress management
  • regular exercise
  • diet
  • nutrition
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