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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience,

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Due to the fact of upgradation in teaching methodologies, students are allowed quite a free time
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 hours. According to a few,
instead
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accessive leisure time, they should be given additional assignments.
However
, I think that they should have spare hours so that they can play sports and cultivate their hobbies.
To begin
 with, outdoor activities especially physical games are
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crusial
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crucial
 part of childhood. By playing games, young adults will not only become fit but will
also
 be able to reduce the study pressure on them. Eventually,
this
 will aid in performing well in their studies.
For instance
, when a player is indulged
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 a game, due to
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 adrenaline rush in the body
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a player, the whole body including
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get
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 activated.
Hence
, playing a sport is
exteremly
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extremely
benefitted
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 to offspring.
Furthermore
, I believe that during free time, teenagers should explore their hobbies in arts
such
 as paintings or music. Cultivating their interest in the hobby can be useful in their career.
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 they can even consider it as
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 main profession in future. To illustrate, if someone is playing
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 guitar as a childhood hobby,
this
 talent can be
considred
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considered
 as an additional
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 in the corporate world;
moreover
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one can become a professional guitarist too.
Thus
, I think young ones should learn additional
talent
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 after completing school work. To conclude, according to many, young adults should mainly focus on their studies and must be given additional course work so that they do not waste their study hours. In my
openion
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opinion
, though studying
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curriculum
 course
are
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imporant
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important
, learners must be allowed to perform any
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 activities and explore
thier
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their
 hidden talent after school.
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