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Developments on science and technology have caused environmental problems. Some people think that a simpler way of life will protect the environment, while others believe that science and technology can solve environmental problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The bar chart demonstrates the proportion of businesses making
e-commerce
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purchases
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 by industry in Canada between 2015 and 2019. These industries include Manufacturing, construction, wholesale, retail and information and communications.
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,
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purchases
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 in three categories (construction,wholesale, and retail) increased consistently to approximately 57 per
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 in
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 five-year period. In construction,
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, about a 30 per
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 increase can be seen.
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 number for wholesale was about 20 per
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 and for ,retail it was about 25 per
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.
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, we can see a slight growth in the proportion of businesses making
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purchases
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 in information and communications.
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,
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 growth does not seem to be significant.
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, in manufacturing, we can see that
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 proportion fluctuated. It started with a significant growth in 2016 followed by a slight fall in 2017 and from 2017 onwards, it rose gradually. To conclude, Given the current information, it seems like these four industries are making more
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purchases
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.
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