In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health problems, due to excessive eating of fast

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reaching

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peak in some countries.

Govermnments

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Governments

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should interfere to find a solution to

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a problem, but I don't think that imposing high taxes on

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kind of

food

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would make any difference, because there are

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who are rich and

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who would still pay to satisfy their cravings,

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therefore

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idea would solve the issue. Nowadays,

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became a trend just like fashion, every now and

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there is a new type of

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with a new concept and cool shop launches and becomes very popular

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a sudden. Unfortunately, most of these trendy

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shops serve unhealthy types of

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. In my perspective, governments should not give a green light to these new shops to start working unless they check the quality and components of what they serve to the crowd. While, for the old famous fast

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shops, governments should start making awareness about the danger of

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visiting

them too often. In Egypt,

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, the government made a great

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awareness

campaign about how to take care

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your health and to stay on a perfect diet without having to increase taxes on unhealthy foods.

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interacted very well with

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campaign and started to find time in their busy days to do some sports and to make their own healthy

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while going to work

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of having to order junk

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. In conclusion,

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are more likely to stop an act when they are convinced about it; one would still pay or even find alternatives to satisfy his cravings if he is not persuaded enough.