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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher taxes on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Health problems, due to excessive eating of fast
food
,
is
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 reaching
the
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 peak in some countries.
Govermnments
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Governments
Government
 should interfere to find a solution to
such
 a problem, but I don't think that imposing high taxes on
this
 kind of
food
 would make any difference, because there are
people
 who are rich and
people
 who would still pay to satisfy their cravings,
thererfore
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therefore
 I do not think that
this
 idea would solve the issue. Nowadays,
food
 became a trend just like fashion, every now and
then
 there is a new type of
food
 with a new concept and cool shop launches and becomes very popular
at
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 a sudden. Unfortunately, most of these trendy
food
 shops serve unhealthy types of
food
. In my perspective, governments should not give a green light to these new shops to start working unless they check the quality and components of what they serve to the crowd. While, for the old famous fast
food
 shops, governments should start making awareness about the danger of
visting
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visiting
 them too often. In Egypt,
for example
, the government made a great
arawreness
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awareness
 campaign about how to take care
about
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 your health and to stay on a perfect diet without having to increase taxes on unhealthy foods.
People
 interacted very well with
this
 campaign and started to find time in their busy days to do some sports and to make their own healthy
food
 while going to work
instead
 of having to order junk
food
. In conclusion,
people
 are more likely to stop an act when they are convinced about it; one would still pay or even find alternatives to satisfy his cravings if he is not persuaded enough.
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