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Illustrates between the detainees from 1930s to 1980s in five different countries.

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The chart illustrates the
number
 of
detainees
 from
1930s
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 to
1980s
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 in five different countries. It is clear from the data that in Canada, New Zealand, and Australia the
number
 of
prisoners
 dropped over time.
In contrast
, in the United States of America and Great Britain, the
rate
 of detention increased
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However
, in all of the mentioned countries, except
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 Britain, it had a fluctuated path during
this
 period of time. Between
1930s
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 and 1940s In Great Britain, the
number
 of
prisoners
 remained almost the same, and from 1950, it rose gradually to reach its maximum
into
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 the1980. In the United States, the
rate
 of
detainees
 has fluctuated from 100.000 to 140.000. in these years.
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 in 1980 in the USA, the
number
 of
detainees
has
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reached its maximum which was 140.000. In
the
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1930, Canada had the highest
rate
 of
prisoners
 among the other countries. As years passed
this
number
 decreased,
although
 there have been fluctuations. In the year 1930 in New Zealand, the
number
 of
prisoners
 was 100.000, and
then
 in 1940, a striking decline occur. After that, the
rate
 soured until reaching the
number
to
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 90.000 in 1980, which was lesser than in 1930.
Similarly
, in Australia, the
number
 of
detainees
 fell in the year 1980 compared to 1930.
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