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Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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Tertiary
education
 has always been a standard
of
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 youngsters.Some people claim that the most effective method to be successful in
life
 is considered to be achieving a university
education
 whilst others believe that it is not crucial anymore. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both ideas and explain why I prefer the former. There are some individuals who refuse the
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correlation
 of success with
college
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education
, basically because of the cost of tuition. Most
universities
 today demand a substantial amount of money in return
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 quality
education
.
This
 may likely cause
students
 from typical families unable to continue their tertiary acquisition.
Hence
, young people often opt to work , decline
universities
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, and pursue their goals In terms of obtaining
university
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education
,
students
 may gain a broad range of social
network
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 when exposed to people around the world. Since the world is multi-cultural,
universities
 tend to collect
students
 globally and inevitably allow
students
 to interact with various individuals.
Thus
, the more
acquitances
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acquaintances
 they know , the more beneficial their
life
 will be. Apart from
social
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network
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, youngsters in colleges will receive a myriad of knowledge, which is the prime source of success. In my perspective,
students
 will have opportunities to study in huge libraries with a variety of documentaries in
universities
. With the help of their studies, they may potentially become professionals in their fields ultimately acquiring a promising
life
. In conclusion, despite the tuition fee
is
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 arguably
the
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 difficulty
of
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 many
students
, I believe there are far more merits to be gained when attending
universities
which
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 can
be contribute
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 to
the
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 overall success in
life
.
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