what are the features of a good night sleep? whn was the last time you had a good sleep?

A good
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's sleep and proper nutrition are the most important things that a human should use. I recently had insomnia and
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that was awful I woke up and could not sleep anymore.
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decided to seek
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and solve my problem. I had to use my savings because of the high cost of consulting and try to keep my head above water. I should cut back on my spends that
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can afford my
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counselling
. Anyway,
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went to and she
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with me and said your afternoon nap should be come off
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you can sleep well
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some
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before your sleep and
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sound
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of your podcast down during your
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sleep
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calms your brain and improves your sleep. Get rid of all the things that increase your stress. Cut down on fatty foods and sweet foods That
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you sleep better. And always fill yourself up with fresh food like fruit,meat,..... I have been doing these things for about a month and thank God my sleep has improved a lot
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she ripped me off with The cost of her consultation :)
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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