Schools have limited amount of money to spend.some people suggest that it should be sent on good teachers, while others say it should be spent for buying equipment like computers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The budget of
schools
limits
services
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that they can provide for pupils. While some people are promoting the idea that
this
money should be spent to hire better instructors, others consider educational
equipments
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equipment
types of equipment
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far more important. I am convinced that there are certain
subjects
that good teachers are essential;
however
, other
subjects
can not be learned without proper equipment. The ones who advocate good educators have some valid points.
For example
in Iran, they took the example of
well known
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highschools like Aboureyhan or NODET
where
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which
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actually do not have developed equipment but are very successful in preparing
students
to get approved in the best universities in town.
Besides
that, even
schools
that are
equiped
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equipped
with proper devices should have good teachers to educate pupils
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means of using them.
Consequently
, many
subjects
like mathematics and science usually do not need special equipment to be learnt, the ones that the
students
of those
schools
are good at and often accepted in. Despite the above, doing experiments by using instruments has always been viewed as the best way of understanding
subjects
profoundly. The reason for
this
is the failure of
teoritical
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theoretical
lessons to figure out each student's weaknesses before putting them into
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practice.
For instance
,
students
can not learn
working
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with computer programs, like Word or Powerpoint, without
practicing
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them on computers. To exemplify
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further
, for a pupil to perceive the effects of chemicals on
eachother
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each other
, they should examine these effects
at
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in
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laboratories using instruments.
Therefore
, people believe that providing necessary devices for
students
to examine their
knowlege
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knowledge
is vital for
schools
. In conclusion, one can say good teachers are very important in certain
subjects
like mathematics and medicine and it is impossible to learn them without experienced educators.
Nevertheless
, if it comes to
subjects
like computers and chemistry,
then
instruments are far more critical.
Thus
, I would say that it all depends on the subject being taught.
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