Schools have limited amount of money to spend.some people suggest that it should be sent on good teachers, while others say it should be spent for buying equipment like computers. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The budget of

schools

limits

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that they can provide for pupils. While some people are promoting the idea that

this

money should be spent to hire better instructors, others consider educational

equipments

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equipment

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far more important. I am convinced that there are certain

subjects

that good teachers are essential;

however

, other

subjects

can not be learned without proper equipment. The ones who advocate good educators have some valid points.

For example

in Iran, they took the example of

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highschools like Aboureyhan or NODET

where

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actually do not have developed equipment but are very successful in preparing

students

to get approved in the best universities in town.

Besides

that, even

schools

that are

equiped

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equipped

with proper devices should have good teachers to educate pupils

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means of using them.

Consequently

, many

subjects

like mathematics and science usually do not need special equipment to be learnt, the ones that the

students

of those

schools

are good at and often accepted in. Despite the above, doing experiments by using instruments has always been viewed as the best way of understanding

subjects

profoundly. The reason for

this

is the failure of

teoritical

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theoretical

lessons to figure out each student's weaknesses before putting them into

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practice.

For instance

,

students

can not learn

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with computer programs, like Word or Powerpoint, without

practicing

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them on computers. To exemplify

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further

, for a pupil to perceive the effects of chemicals on

eachother

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each other

, they should examine these effects

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laboratories using instruments.

Therefore

, people believe that providing necessary devices for

students

to examine their

knowlege

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knowledge

is vital for

schools

. In conclusion, one can say good teachers are very important in certain

subjects

like mathematics and medicine and it is impossible to learn them without experienced educators.

Nevertheless

, if it comes to

subjects

like computers and chemistry,

then

instruments are far more critical.

Thus

, I would say that it all depends on the subject being taught.