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Some people say that studying at school is not important because the most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that a school or college education is not as crucial as the lessons outside them.
This
 essay will put the statement into consideration and at
last
 will state a personal opinion. It is undeniable that the materials in classes are based on theory and not practical in the real world.
As a result
, youngsters are not taught to apply in real situations.A survey conducted by numerous successful people has shown that 70% of them did not use knowledge in school to achieve their aims.
Moreover
, children have not learnt some useful skills in life inside the classroom
such
 as money management and communication skills in the workplace.
For example
, the majority of people start up their own business after graduation and approximately half of them failed due to a lack of the skills which are needed to be learnt by experience.
On the other hand
, employment in some countries still requires degrees as the individuals will be considered as already educated in basic knowledge in the major
thus
 it make their careers become less complicated.
Also
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 the level of degrees may relate to the rate of salaries and welfare in the company.To give an instance, Google company qualified 30 technology engineers from Harvard University and the University of Cambridge and pay at a rate of $10000-$12000 per month. In my opinion, I firmly agree with the statement above which says you cannot study the most important lessons in classes due to the reason that they are based only on theory, not practical and not able to apply in real life.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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