In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In

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current era, the issues of over-population and urbanization have brought

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in citizens.

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, the thought of possessing a

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significance compared to the rental one. In my opinion,

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circumstance is a natural human drive for security and prestige, but it presents many negative aspects.

To begin

with, the thought of settling down is inherent in many cultures, so the instability of renting a place might be a cause of concern for many

people

.

Moreover

, buying a

home

is an essential component of human life displaying extremely deep meaning both mentally and physically.

For example

, in terms of Vietnamese spirit, the

house

is considered a particularly major life milestone and a successful achievement.

Consequently

, the size and condition of

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become a sign of their social standing.

Secondly

, investing in a

home

is considered a profitable option by many

people

. Nowadays, with the ever-expanding real estate, there are more and more housing projects being advertised in the news with a variety of prices.

Moreover

, the value of

such

an asset may increase in a few years, so many

people

might find it appealing to invest in properties. Specifically, with the rise in market prices, landlords might find it more beneficial to have their properties sold than to waste monthly rent. It is possible to argue that the importance of owning a

home

is extremely important in terms of motivation.

However

, it can cause

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people

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for a

house

. Especially when purchasing a

house

in a city where real estate values are unreasonably exaggerated.

As a result

, if

people

wish to buy a

home

, they will consider the deep economic pressures. I believe that the combination of

this

extreme stress and the internal strain caused by the battle to make ends meet has a significant negative impact on mental health. To summarize, the situation when

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house

ownership rather than the rental option might be caused by cultural and economic aspects.

However

, if

this

trend will be continuously increasing, the negative prospects of

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as well as to many individuals are irrefutable.