Write a letter to the local council to stop the closure of a children’s toy store in your area. In the letter, you should tell: tell him how important the toy store is explain why you don’t want to close it Suggest what advice you want them to take.

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Dear sir, I am krutika, a local resident of our city. I am writing

this

letter to draw your attention to the mischievous activity happening in the nearby toy store. I am very much aware of the seriousness of a toy

shop

This

is one of the best places to get all the wishes fulfilled for any kid.

However

, I want

this

shop

to get closed. Recently I came to know about the exact things happening in that

shop

. He used to sell alcohol backside of the

shop

, which is not valid in our region. So he used to do

this

business in the form of a toy

shop

. I have seen

this

many times.

This

is misleading activity happening. And

this

should be controlled from the beginning. So I request you to check it and take some action on

this

shop

. I hope you understand the seriousness of

this

situation. Yours Faithfully

Submitted by Shabanraza489 on Sun Apr 17 2022

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Write a letter to the local council to stop the closure of a children’s toy store in your area. In the letter, you should tell: tell him how important the toy store is explain why you don’t want to close it Suggest what advice you want them to take.

Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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