Write a letter to the local council to stop the closure of a children’s toy store in your area. In the letter, you should tell: tell him how important the toy store is explain why you don’t want to close it Suggest what advice you want them to take.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My Name is Shaban Raza. I am a resident of Southhall and I have a
store
there with the name Kids play opposite to bank and recently council announced to demolish the properties owing to build a new road, therefore
, I am writing to express my great concern regarding the closure of the outlet in the town,
Firstly
I would like to tell you that it is the only store
for children in this
area and quite famous among the local resident and children buy plenty of toys there. in addition
, folks from remote distances also
visit us to buy kid's toys because my store
is located in the centre of the town.
Secondly
, I get a stay from the court regarding that case I recently made to the deputy commissioner and session judge and I will not close it at any cost it is my own property and I have been running a toys business there since 2005.
Lastly
, I would like to make some suggestions such
as restricting the road map up to certain levels and a range that would not trespass the land in addition
, customer consent should be considered before starting the planning and the back location to my store
is spacious in order to start the road construction.
Thank You in advance
Yours Faithfully,
Shaban RazaSubmitted by Shabanraza489 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite