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Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, with the detrimental effects modern technology brings to
cities
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 like pollution and noise , there are certainly many
people
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 holding the view that it is not healthy to live in big
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. From where I stand,
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 is worth thinking
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this
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 issue, while we can not deny the benefits big
cities
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 bring to our life. On one hand, I agree that there
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 many problems caused by big
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. The
first
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 thing that pumps to my mind is the severe pollution.
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, there are overloaded autos in Beijing which is the
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 band city and the capital
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 China. A great amount of carbon dioxide emits into the air because of the heavy
trafic
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traffic
 which leads to more and more smog. A thin kind of air
condition
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 would definitely harm
people
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's physical
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health
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heath
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health
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. what's more, unexpected population growth threatens the employment rate and heavy financial conditions
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 the government.
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, the unemployed
people
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 may suffer mental health problems and money allocated to the hospital would probably be reduced.
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,
people
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 may face more and more problems
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 keeping healthy and curing their illnesses if they are sick.
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, big
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 mean more opportunities for a better living for
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. what I am saying is that, if
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 live in a place that can provide a better education situation, they are more likely to become well-rounded individuals who can contribute more to society. If there are more highly educated citizens in a city, it is more likely that there are more chances for
people
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 to carry out scientific research and more advanced methods would be found to improve living conditions for
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.
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, new drugs and advanced medical treatments would be implemented which can help human beings have
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better health. To put things in a nutshell. I think the big
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 effect is like a two-sided sword. Our concerns would cover traffic and air pollution which would
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people
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.
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, at the same time, we should admit that big
cities
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also
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 bring a bright side for us in terms of health.
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