Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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It’s easier to prevent than to cure.
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, executive representatives of the governing body globally put expenses on curing disorders firsthand and not sufficient on
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education and impediment of the diseases. I totally agree with
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I’ll explain my take on
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with, education is a tool
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essential in people’s life. It gives us an opportunity to impede a lot of bad consequences of everything. And while
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is busy wasting money on
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illnesses
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education we’ll see a society that keeps on consuming fast food and is unaware of elementary skills
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related
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. But
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can be figured out due to
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-promoting ads that encourage healthy lifestyles and hinder unhealthy patterns
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as obesity.
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is one way to have a well-brought-up society and it will gradually result in
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ilnesses
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illnesses
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to waste money on them. They say that demand creates supply, but I guess it’s vice versa. If we are represented with
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products we will consume that. So the government is better to start taking care
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increasing supply, in
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the demand will be of high quality. When it comes to
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issues
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as AIDS, Hepatitis C virus and a
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other ones, we again notice the lack of information among people.
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a lot of NGOs take care of preventing these issues
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workshops or study sessions in schools, the government should
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be actively involved in
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. To sum up, there are plenty of ways to do so that the number of illnesses will decrease and people will become more self-aware.
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and foremost problem to be solved will become teaching people properly.
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