Marketers should not be allowed to target children in their advertisement. Would you agree or disagree with this statement?

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human life is a new thing that was developed to an efficient and comfortable that apply

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each characteristic of people. Certainly, in marketing work

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the craftsmanship of marketers have many offering that

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can choose and they need to use

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to get a better choice. Most importantly we should not overlook

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. From my perspective, I totally disagree with that statement. Undoubtedly, many people think they should not be allowed to target

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because they do not have an experience and some content do not appropriate

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their young age. They do not be aware

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of marketing and can believe easily about

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. They cannot

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expensive merchandise.

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younger kids do not have an experience as much as mature

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for me, they have a lot of imagination that make them

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grow up so,

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should not intercept student learning. Actually, the most unexpected that some mature never know is

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to purchase goods or service. In conclusion, some people believe that they should not make

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because of their younger age and they cannot

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for merchandise or service. Especially, their responsibility is not much to make

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while I disagree about that content and think they should give an

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to make

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’s imagination grow. Certainly,

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can illustrate a wonderful thing or it can be learning material for kids.