Write a motivational letter of application for a course

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter in
interest
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the interest
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of
Math
educational programme. My parents attracted me to
this
particular programme. They motivate me to
study
this
program because it will help me in real life. My
ambitions
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is to
study
building engineer.
Math
will help me to
study
building engineering easily. In my school
Math
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wasn't
wasnt
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the most important subject and I
didnt
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didn't
studied
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ii hard. But I started learning
Math
at home and I become better. I want to join your
Math
programme
,
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apply
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because I like
Math
I choose
Math
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the Math
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course because I want to
study
for
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building engineering. I hope you see
this
letter Yours faithfully,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • motivated
  • aspiring
  • dedicated
  • education
  • career objectives
  • enhance
  • expertise
  • innovative
  • contribution
  • achievements
  • credentials
  • perspective
  • enrichment
  • diverse
  • aspiration
  • commitment
  • professional development
  • beneficial
  • insightful
  • diligence
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