some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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universities
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say the least. While some people are promoting the idea that high scores are quite critical for a student to be accepted
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reputed
universities
, others consider it not fair to the ones who do not have high scores. I am convinced that having good marks should not be vital for
universities
. Those who advocate high school performance as an appropriate
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for
universities'
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have valid points. They often take the example of vital subjects like medicine and engineering which require
students
who are hardworking and contributive. Since these types of careers are involved
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sensitive jobs that directly affect humans lives,
students
who dedicate themselves to education are demonstrating that they
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to be productive and contributive society members in future. Added to
this
is
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aspect of
universities
to have a better rank in the world by accepting better
students
.
For example
, Harvard
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has had
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rank for years because the
students
being accepted there are good enough to improve the
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educational level. Despite the above, avoiding
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discrimination
and giving a fair chance to
students
have always been viewed
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a valuable manner. The reason for
students
being offered even opportunities to enter a
university
is the hidden talents they might own that have not had a chance to be developed.
For instance
, a student who could not perform
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at
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high school due to their
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divorce can lose the opportunity of being a doctor even with having the required
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.
Besides
that, there are some occupations in which practical abilities are far more vital, like designers. A good example of it is
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interior designer that needs to have a striking imagination rather than the ability
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things.
Therefore
, people believe that basing
universities
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enterance
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entrance
on scores and depriving
students
with low grades of
further
education is not logical. To sum up, one can say that high school grades are critical as
university
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entrance
criterias
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criteria
because it demonstrates the ability of the student to perform a job.
However
, I believe that it is not always correct because a talented person might have lost that time.
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grades do not matter in.
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