some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Being accepted
in
Change preposition
into
universities
in this
competitive era is difficult to
say the least. While some people are promoting the idea that high scores are quite critical for a student to be accepted Add the comma(s)
,to
in
reputed Change preposition
into
universities
, others consider it not fair to the ones who do not have high scores. I am convinced that having good marks should not be vital for universities
.
Those who advocate high school performance as an appropriate criteria
for Correct the article-noun agreement
criterion
universities'
Change noun form
universities
enterance
have valid points. They often take the example of vital subjects like medicine and engineering which require Correct your spelling
entrance
students
who are hardworking and contributive. Since these types of careers are involved with
sensitive jobs that directly affect humans lives, Change preposition
apply
students
who dedicate themselves to education are demonstrating that they are determine
to be productive and contributive society members in future. Added to Change the verb form
are determined
this
is personal
aspect of Add an article
the personal
a personal
universities
to have a better rank in the world by accepting better students
. For example
, Harvard university
has had Change the capitalization
University
good
rank for years because the Correct article usage
a good
students
being accepted there are good enough to improve the university
educational level.
Despite the above, avoiding Change noun form
university's
descrimination
and giving a fair chance to Correct your spelling
discrimination
students
have always been viewed as
a valuable manner. The reason for Change preposition
in
students
being offered even opportunities to enter a university
is the hidden talents they might own that have not had a chance to be developed. For instance
, a student who could not perform good
Change the adjective
well
at
high school due to their Change preposition
in
parents
divorce can lose the opportunity of being a doctor even with having the required Change to a genitive case
parent's
parents'
potentials
. Fix the agreement mistake
potential
Besides
that, there are some occupations in which practical abilities are far more vital, like designers. A good example of it is a
interior designer that needs to have a striking imagination rather than the ability Change the article
an
of memorizing
things. Replace the preposition
to memorize
Therefore
, people believe that basing universities
Fix the agreement mistake
university
enterance
on scores and depriving Correct your spelling
entrance
students
with low grades of further
education is not logical.
To sum up, one can say that high school grades are critical as university
enterance
Correct your spelling
entrance
criterias
because it demonstrates the ability of the student to perform a job. Correct your spelling
criteria
However
, I believe that it is not always correct because a talented person might have lost that time. Moreover
, there are some fields Change preposition
in that
that
grades do not matter in.Correct word choice
where
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