some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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say the least. While some people are promoting the idea that high scores are quite critical for a student to be accepted

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reputed

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, others consider it not fair to the ones who do not have high scores. I am convinced that having good marks should not be vital for

universities

. Those who advocate high school performance as an appropriate

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for

universities'

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have valid points. They often take the example of vital subjects like medicine and engineering which require

students

who are hardworking and contributive. Since these types of careers are involved

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sensitive jobs that directly affect humans lives,

students

who dedicate themselves to education are demonstrating that they

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to be productive and contributive society members in future. Added to

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is

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aspect of

universities

to have a better rank in the world by accepting better

students

.

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, Harvard

university

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has had

good

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rank for years because the

students

being accepted there are good enough to improve the

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educational level. Despite the above, avoiding

descrimination

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discrimination

and giving a fair chance to

students

have always been viewed

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a valuable manner. The reason for

students

being offered even opportunities to enter a

university

is the hidden talents they might own that have not had a chance to be developed.

For instance

, a student who could not perform

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at

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high school due to their

parents

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divorce can lose the opportunity of being a doctor even with having the required

potentials

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.

Besides

that, there are some occupations in which practical abilities are far more vital, like designers. A good example of it is

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interior designer that needs to have a striking imagination rather than the ability

of memorizing

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things.

Therefore

, people believe that basing

universities

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enterance

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entrance

on scores and depriving

students

with low grades of

further

education is not logical. To sum up, one can say that high school grades are critical as

university

enterance

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entrance

criterias

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criteria

because it demonstrates the ability of the student to perform a job.

However

, I believe that it is not always correct because a talented person might have lost that time.

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, there are some fields

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grades do not matter in.