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Parents often give children everything they ask for and do what they like. Is it good for children? What are the consequences when they grow up?

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Nowadays,
parents
 are more concerned about the way they raise their
children
.It seems to be a widespread problem to provide everything to the
children
 whatever they ask for.I firmly believe that
this
 method is harmful
for
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 a child's life .
This
 could lead to some serious adverse consequences when they grow up. There are several reasons why over-indulgence is not good for
children
.
Firstly
,over-caring done by
parents
make
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makes
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 the
children
 more reliant
for
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on
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 nearly everything,even for basic tasks in their lives.My 8-year-old nephew is a good case in point.
Although
, he is mature enough, even after that he does not feed himself and still relies on his mother to do little things.
Moreover
,
children
 who are given everything become greedy in their adulthood.In spite of having many toys and ,gadgets they keep pestering their
parents
 for more latest versions of games and lego sets.
Secondly
,
children
 are provided with everything.Obviously,they tend to have bad spending habits when growing older.They do not understand the value of hard work and the importance of money management skills.So,they usually buy whatever they like regardless of whether or not the item is necessary.
In addition
,over-indulged
children
 have a tendency to depend on other people,whenever they encounter any problem in their workplace,
instead
 of trying to solve the issue on their own by using every possible skill,they tend to depend on the assistance of their colleagues. To summarize,overindulgence has some serious detrimental results on
children
's habits and behaviours.
This
 could cause adverse consequences,ranging from
a bad habits
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bad habits
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 to reliant individuals in their adulthood.
Therefore
,
parents
 should imply different parenting techniques to overcome
this
 issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • indulgence
  • overindulgence
  • leniency
  • emotional resilience
  • rejection
  • entitlement
  • realistic expectations
  • self-regulated behavior
  • egocentric
  • financial management
  • professional relationships
  • collaboratively
  • criticism
  • appreciation
  • value
  • effort
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