In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

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become more valuable, the number of
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choosing to study abroad is rising. Both advantages and disadvantages should be discussed. One major benefit is that studying abroad in another country
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has a different
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can improve one’s writing and listening skills.
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,
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have to be familiar with
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their native
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language
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;
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, they may not able to receive the knowledge. As soon as
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master a particular
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, they may have more promising prospects to be employed by multi-international companies. Another benefit is that studying in
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another country
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can increase
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. Experiencing another culture can help them to consider
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are merits and demerits
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that country. Both of them can be consulted and be used in their own
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.
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, the railway system in Japan is complimented as the best in the world. If some
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study relative major in
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university, they can not only absorb the knowledge but
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experience by themselves. In that case, they can bring the improvements to their nation and update the system.
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, the significant drawbacks should not be neglected. When
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study abroad, they may struggle with different social problems.
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of them leave their hometown and
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lack
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life skills. They have to do all the
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by themselves even though they may not be trained before.
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, many
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are used to
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on their parents when it comes to law. Theft happens
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, especially to
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foreigners.
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victims from other
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do not be familiar with the local laws. Adding the
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barriers, most of them cannot deal with
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things well. These drawbacks make the
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live difficultly. In summary, the advantages and disadvantages should be considered before
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choose to acquire degrees from other
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.
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