There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
to aware you of the difficulty people were facing in my locality because of the uneven arrival and departure timing of the bus.
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problem in transit service started Linking Words
last
month when a few new stops were added to the route. Despite new halt points, the drivers are still running their buses at the same time they used to run from the bus station. Linking Words
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is creating a huge mess and confusion among daily users.
I am working in a multinational company and use Linking Words
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travel facility almost five days a week but Linking Words
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the Change preposition
for
last
few weeks every day, Linking Words
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am getting late for my workplace. Change the capitalization
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is affecting my mental peace as Linking Words
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am answerable to my boss every day for being late.
I hope you will look into Change the capitalization
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this
matter promptly and resolve it. Linking Words
Also
, I suggest you make sure all the bus employees work Linking Words
according to
the required route timings.
Yours Faithfully
Rajpreet SinghLinking Words
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task achievement
Consider providing more specific examples of how the bus service issues have impacted you personally or affected other commuters in your locality. This could strengthen your explanation.
coherence and cohesion
Try to ensure that the grammatical structures are correct, such as using articles correctly, e.g., 'I am writing to inform you...' instead of 'I am writing this to aware you...'.
task achievement
You have clearly identified the main issue with the bus service and provided a relevant personal experience that connects to the problem.
coherence and cohesion
Your closing statement is polite and encourages a prompt response, which is appropriate for a formal letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite