Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argue that traditional paper-based resources are better. Discuss and give your opinion.

In
this
new generation,youth has more comfortable studying on the
internet
.of course,
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the nation
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nation
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had adapted to technology like the
internet
.In my perspective,they prefer online because they can search through google for their solutions.While some oppose that
paper
-based resources are useful. On the one hand,reading online can learn faster like a bird catching worms.Nowadays,online reading is a daily routine.Because they are updating news information around the world.
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, they give each and every detail about the particular news.
For instance
,war is happening
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in Russia and
Ukrain
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Ukraine
.In
this
,people are curious
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it started?why it's started?when?and Deadly news
this
all are not left even a single word on the
internet
.
Nevertheless
,it will not create surrounding dirty where else
paper
-based are likely to make litres.
Secondly
,it doesn't consume time.While reading if they don't know the meaning of the words which is difficult,they search directly through google or translation which makes them easier to understand.
This
means online creates human life better. While
on the other hand
,it is true that traditional
paper
-based are materials
also
productive .In the olden days,before the
internet
discover people kept in touch with
newspaper
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newspapers
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.Communication was all through letter writing.And children were learning properly through books without
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disturbed
distributed
by movies or video
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online.And Still some parents who came through
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are saying that they like traditional
paper
base. If in case of
paper
writing ,there is no sight effect of eyes while
internet
gives.In the meanwhile,
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on
paper
is
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cheaper to buy rather than paying
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billa on the
internet
.So it saves financial too. So concluding points,reading
through
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online has more useful as well drawbacks for youth like distract by other videos.But as well as
paper
to has demerits in making surrounding literally.Both the point have advantages and disadvantages so it depends on
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nation
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hands whether it's good or bad should know how to utilize
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harming
environment
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for the
further
future.
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