Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argue that traditional paper-based resources are better. Discuss and give your opinion.

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new generation,youth has more comfortable studying on the

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had adapted to technology like the

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.In my perspective,they prefer online because they can search through google for their solutions.While some oppose that

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-based resources are useful. On the one hand,reading online can learn faster like a bird catching worms.Nowadays,online reading is a daily routine.Because they are updating news information around the world.

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,it will not create surrounding dirty where else

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,it doesn't consume time.While reading if they don't know the meaning of the words which is difficult,they search directly through google or translation which makes them easier to understand.

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means online creates human life better. While

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productive .In the olden days,before the

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.Communication was all through letter writing.And children were learning properly through books without

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online.And Still some parents who came through

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are saying that they like traditional

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cheaper to buy rather than paying

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billa on the

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.So it saves financial too. So concluding points,reading

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online has more useful as well drawbacks for youth like distract by other videos.But as well as

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to has demerits in making surrounding literally.Both the point have advantages and disadvantages so it depends on

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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312 words

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Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argue that traditional paper-based resources are better. Discuss and give your opinion.

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the ‏past. Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television ‏for children. ‏

Due to development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Compared to the past, more people are now studying abroad because it is more convenient and cheaper than before. Do you think this is beneficial to the foreign student’s home country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweight disadvantages?

Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion