Weddings are gretting bigger and more expensive. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?
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young adults and their families is how to implement wedding Change preposition
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ceremonies
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a crowded gatherings
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a crowded gathering
crowded gatherings
thus
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On
this
occasion, people are racked up with large bills. Linking Words
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they
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pay
high
fee even for a simple firework.
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the high
a high
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girl
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financial
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a financial
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subtituded
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substituted
prosperty
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property
prosperity
spouse
.
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a spouse
the spouse
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my best Change preposition
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knowledge, focusing on Change preposition
apply
ceremonies
and their expenses is just wasting time and money which must be moderated. Use synonyms
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an increase
depression
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a depression
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