More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays,

students

tend to

study

abroad.

Although

it has some disadvantages, I believe that its benefits are greater. Studying in a foreign country has many

benifits

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benefits

Firstly

because

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students

who want to

studying

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study

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overseas could improve their skills

such

as time-management skills,

problem- solving

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problem-solving

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intepersonal

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interpersonal

communication or presentation.

Secondly

, when

students

do not

study

in their country, they could travel

lots

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of places which

has

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have

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breath-taking

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view to

check in

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for example

Then

, they have

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experience variety of cultures and

costome

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customs

costume

For instance

students

who go to

the

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Japan to

study

may know a thing or two about

traditional

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the traditional

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costume ‘kimono’.

Finally

students

study

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who study

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overseas may become more self-reliant. Because they have to do part-time jobs to earn money which

help

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them pay their

university

tuition fee,

Besides

its benefits, studying abroad has some drawbacks.

First

, it may be

dur

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due

to language barriers and

culture

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cultural

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problems,

esspecially

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especially

when the

students

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are

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not

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native

speakers

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speaker

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Therefore

, it could be very difficult for them to make friends or to understand lectures at

university

. For

exxample

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example

, some

students

has

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have

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trouble

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apply

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attending

lesson

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a lesson

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university

because their teacher

talk

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too fast that they do not hear anything.

Furthermore

, when they do teamwork, foreign

students

may not do with you because of their bad language skills.

As a result

, they have

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bad

scores

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and bad academic performance at their

university

Meanwhile

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others said that studying abroad has many drawbacks, I think that it is better to

study

diffrent

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different

countries.

Submitted by Eteacher on Tue Apr 19 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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