Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
Students
have a tendency to do part-time
jobs
after school time
. This
leads to the reduction of concentration and quality of education. This
essay will examine the main causes, before proposing two possible solutions.
Perhaps the most important cause why students
work while in university is that they need to earn money to fund their studies. As the tuition fee for professional careers is very high that students
and their families can not afford to pay for the courses. This
leads to many students
sacrificing their time
for part-time
jobs
instead
of focusing on homework, seminars or projects. For instance
, the average cost of a bachelor of engineering program in a US university is around 150,000 dollars, this
is a big amount. To share this
cost, students
must do the jobs
after school time
such
as waiter, tutor, or cashier. Another key factor is students
need to pay for their living costs. Most of the universities are located in big cities where the expenses are much more expensive than in students
' hometowns. And this
is forced students
to earn money to pay for their living expenses. I think this
issue will affect the physical and mental health of students
, thus
affecting their education quality.
There are several promising solutions. First
of all, the government should have policies to aid students
in their studies. For example
, they can give them loans with low interest and students
will pay them back once they finish the education program and have had the jobs
. Another possible solution is for companies to cooperate with universities to sponsor the studies of students
. These students
will commit to finishing their courses and work for the companies for a certain period after graduation. This
is what Vinfast an automobile company is working with Ton Duc Thang college to train engineers for the workforce at their factory.
In conclusion, lack of financial aid is the main reason why students
work after school time
. However
, with the support of the government and ,companies I think there are solutions to help students
overcome this
issue.Submitted by kennybk04 on
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