You stayed in a rental apartment during your trip last year and were generally satisfied with it. However, you encountered one issue. You are planning another trip and would like to rent the same apartment again. Write a letter to the owner. In your letter Express your interest in renting the apartment again. Mention the problem you faced during your last stay. Provide details about your upcoming trip and ask about the availability of the apartment.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter regarding the availability of the same apartment that I lived in during my Linking Words
last
year's trip.
I really loved your apartment as it has a great infrastructure and is located in a nice locality. I am keen on staying in your condominium again for the next few months. Linking Words
Moreover
, I Linking Words
also
like the neighbours as they are friendly and helpful.
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However
, I faced a minor leakage issue in the flat Linking Words
due to
the problem of drainage. I remember that the water came out from the bathtub because the drain was blocked and the tap was leaking too which made me a little uncomfortable. Linking Words
Overall
, I did not encounter any major trouble during my stay in the flat.
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In addition
, I am visiting your city next month for my office conference which is really important for my promotion. Linking Words
This
meeting is with foreign delegates so I have to prepare for it prior, and I need Linking Words
working
from home. It would be great if you Change the verb form
to work
can
again rent me your apartment to stay.
I am not sure if you have already rented your place to someone else. I am waiting for your positive response.
Yours Faithfully,
Harmeet Wrong verb form
could
kaur
Change the capitalization
Kaur
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coherence and cohesion
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task achievement
Review grammar and punctuation to eliminate minor errors.
task achievement
The letter is polite and uses appropriate language for a formal request.
coherence and cohesion
The closing of the letter is appropriately formal and respectful.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.