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Being good at math depends more on natural ability than on the quality of teaching they receive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#math #ability #quality
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It is believed that at school subjects like math are essential for
students
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 in order to get a promotion.
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, some children have their own natural
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 related to mathematics, it can be seen that teaching methods for math are not more quality than
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. Personally, I firmly agree with
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 thesis,
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 there have some teaching methods math is crucial, some part of kids have unique
abilities
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 with the
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 point, from my perspective, there are plenty of ways to get the best way possible for children. The
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 and foremost reason is that natural ability is one of the most important and effective ways to improve their skills as well as it is found easily by
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.
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, natural kinds of
abilities
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 are really beneficial for all pupils at school.
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, there is no need to teach children how to use and how to solute problems or calculate numbers, it is came from natural
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. If offsprings have interests in
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 subject it is the best way to progress knowledge rapidly.
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, attempting the argument that, if the
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 do not have any knowledge or interests concerning the subjects, that way.
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, society should be provided them with some fascinating ideas about how to play musical instruments or how to cook some meals, depending on the student's experience or personality traits.
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, pupils are facilitated by some types of mental or physical activity
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 as sports and chess-like brain-training courses.
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 of all, the government should attention to their interests regarding what they want. To sum up, from my personal opinion about
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 issue, both points have merits that the society should be an optional program to
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, in spite of their jobs are not necessarily they have to work or do it
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 why it should be reduced in some ways.
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