You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it?

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Dear Manager, I lodged in your hotel over the weekend and unfortunately, I forgot some of my items of clothing inside the room I slept.

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, I am writing

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email to inform you about them. As regards the specifics of my reservation, I checked in around 7pm, on the 10th of June, 2024 and I was there until the 12th

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, 2024. During my stay, I was in room 202 all through the period aside from the few times I went out to see some friends. I need to state clearly that I left a black suit and a red winter jacket.

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I checked my suitcase carefully,

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, I must have missed it

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I was rushing to the airport. As a solution, I would appreciate it if you could help deliver them via courier to where I stay in New York or keep them for me and I'll pick them up next week when I return. Thanks for your understanding. Yours faithfully, Moses.

peteromisakinMon Jul 22 2024

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The letter covers all the necessary points clearly and thoroughly.

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Your writing tone is appropriate and polite.

logical structure

The letter has a logical structure with appropriate greeting and closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

166 words

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