You forgot an item of clothing at the hotel where you stayed recently. Write a letter to the hotel manager and include the following: – When did you stay and in what room? – Describe the item you left behind. – What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear Manager,
I lodged in your hotel over the weekend and unfortunately, I forgot some of my items of clothing inside the room I slept.
Therefore
, I am writing this
email to inform you about them.
As regards the specifics of my reservation, I checked in around 7pm, on the 10th of June, 2024 and I was there until the 12th June
, 2024. During my stay, I was in room 202 all through the period aside from the few times I went out to see some friends.
I need to state clearly that I left a black suit and a red winter jacket. Change preposition
of June
Although
I checked my suitcase carefully, however
, I must have missed it while
I was rushing to the airport.
As a solution, I would appreciate it if you could help deliver them via courier to where I stay in New York or keep them for me and I'll pick them up next week when I return.
Thanks for your understanding.
Yours faithfully,
Moses.Submitted by peteromisakin on
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