People who travel to another country to live, work or study for a period of time often suffer badly from homesickness Why is this? What are the best ways to reduce this problem?

It is true that some
people
can have some bad feelings when they need to go abroad to work, live or study
in
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long
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time. In
this
essay, the causes of
this
phenomenon will be analyzed and the solutions to solve
this
problem will be provided as well. Some
people
think that
people
who have to live far from their home can suffer badly
emotion
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emotions
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such
as missing their hometown because of the following reason.
First
,
people
who go abroad to live have to settle down
at
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a new
place
that they do not know before.
Therefore
, they can feel lonely
between
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strangers.
Secondly
,
people
might miss their family, friends and their old lives.
This
is because everything in
new
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a new
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place
is not familiar
with
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them.
Hence
, it is quite hard for them to be
socilized
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socialized
in
new
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place
immediately. Fortunately, there are some measures that can help
homesick
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feeling of
people
becomes better. The
first
solution is that
people
should focus on working or studying.
Therefore
, they may not have enough time to think about the past when they are busy.
For instance
, if
people
have to work
everyday
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, they can feel tired and need to take a rest after a
hard working
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day.
As a result
, they can not think too much about their family and friends
at
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in
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their hometown.
Secondly
,
people
should go
outsite
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outside
to make a new
relationship
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relationships
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that can help them feel happier.
This
is because if
people
have some new friends and new neighbours
at
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in
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a new
place
, they may not feel lonely anymore.
Therefore
, the bad emotion can be improved. In conclusion, it seems to me that
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is the feeling that
people
usually have when they go abroad to study, live or work.
However
,
people
should find some positive ways to address
this
problem to have a better life.
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