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Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, other say that things like television or friends have the must important influence on them. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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Some people believe that parents have the highest
influence
 on a
child
's
development
. It is
also
 believed by others that their
friends
 or
television
 have an even higher
influence
 on them. Anyway, both parties are not wrong. There are many factors that play an important role in the
development
 of a
child
.
For example
, parents will affect their kids' behaviour from their birth. They will learn how to behave at home and in public over the
first
 years of their lives. So, it can be said that relatives have the most significant
influence
 in the
first
 five or six years of the
child
 but, when they go to kindergarten or preschool, the teacher or
friends
 might change them. Once, the kids go to kindergarten, preschool or school, they will
also
 learn from their teachers about life. At
this
 age, they will start to watch different
television
 shows than before, which can
also
 have a different
influence
 on the
further
development
 of children.
Furthermore
, they will get some
friends
 in school, which can change their minds about living as well as
television
, computer games, or teachers and parents. In conclusion, I don't agree with both of those arguments. In my opinion, it is impossible to say who has the most important
influence
 on your
child
's
development
. I think it is more in the kids' hands to go the right or the wrong way of life. It depends on their
friends
, teachers, the
television
 shows they watched and most of all on their own minds and decisions.
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