These days, many university courses are offered through the internet. Some people think that online teaching has more advantages than conventional classroom reaching or lectures, while others claim that there are significant disadvantages. Do the benefits of online teaching outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many institutes of high-level education are promoting to switch from the conventional academic formation practices to a renewed virtual environment.
Nevertheless
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the universities agree on that change. In front of the benefits that
this
movement brought to the educational system, we can observe an easier acquisition of new knowledge and the expansion of our
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boundaries.
On the contrary
, as a negative approach, we notice that some human beings are starting
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disconnected from each other,
also
the evolved loss of the non-verbal language that we find
in-person
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class.
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the reader. As a positive aspect of
this
teaching virtual method, the teachers as well as students,
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are able to reach a higher offer and demand of courses that in the in-person experience.
For instance
, a student that wants to learn something related to
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but
also
wants to get knowledge about medicine doesn’t need to be registered in a university, there are millions of courses available just doing one click on Google.
In addition
to
this
, the personal experience requires a specific place, electricity, water and other facilities to give a class to someone, while the virtual environment does not require it . To give an example, a Colombian professor that wants to teach Spanish to foreigners,
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doesn’t have to rent an office or a desk to provide it, with just its own internet connection, it can do it. Despite
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wonderful panorama, others are not convinced of these advantages. The statistics support them, showing that
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70% of the language transmission is associated
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non-verbal language. If we create educational programs that are filtered by a screen,
this
communication is cut and the natural movements that are done in a conversation,
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are lost. Without taking into account the limits of
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computers, there are many other challenges as the emotional part of being
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by someone. In
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other word, when someone arrives at college and see a friend, the instant reaction is to give a hug or send a little bit of
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personal energy to the others,
this
connection is split through the internet. Summarizing the possibilities that the future teaching channels present us, there are discrepancies between the different actors and all of them are valid for the rest of the population.
Nevertheless
, it would be hard and painful for the new generations, to be obligated to take the exact conventional classroom as their old parents or
also
, to be evolved in a technological place that cannot suit them
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either
neither
. In order to have a teaching diversity, it is recommendable to have many options
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