Nowadays many people travel to foreign countries for pleasure. Some believe this travel has a negative impact on the countries travelled to. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Today international tourism become something common, and on

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basis

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many argue about the consequences, of

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for the

countries

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that attract

visitors

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. Many say that it destroys the country within itself, while others claim that it is beneficial for the

state

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receiving

visitors

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. From my point of view, travelling to foreign

countries

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has

positive

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a positive

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impact for both sides, for

tourists

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and for the

state

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such

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as cultural exchange, new working places. Nowadays it is the most peaceful, tolerant and developed world that ever existed. In some places, the borders between

countries

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disappeared at

all

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apply

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, so it has become easier to travel. It has

major

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a major

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impact

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the current world. People visit other states and bring with them their culture and traditions, in return residents of the

state

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that attract

tourists

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share their values,

ethnic

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and ethnic

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identities with the foreigners. That way the “cultural exchange”

occur

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. It benefits both

of

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the

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sides, as

tourists

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gain new knowledge and experience,

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and the

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country extends its own cultural diversity and heritage. Other than that, the development of

touristic

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the touristic

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sector in the economy of any nation promotes the growth of the GDP. Most

of

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apply

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tourists

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the tourists

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who visit

country

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the country

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stay at hotels, eat at restaurants, use public transport, rest in the special destinations and

visitors

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are ready to pay for that services.

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, tourism creates lots of vocations and job places for the locals.

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, the unemployed adult from Paris may invest

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the

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camera and offer his services as

photographer

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a photographer

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, because there are many foreigners with cash and without

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a camera

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camera

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cameras

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. To conclude, some people might be

sceptic

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and believe that travel has a negative impact on the

countries

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travelled to.

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, international tourism contributes a major proportion to the culture and economy of the

state

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hosting

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by hosting

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visitors

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,

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through

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cultural exchange and

decreasing

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the decreasing

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unemployment

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the unemployment

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rate