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Dear Mrs Stepanova Mt name is Zalina and I am writing to enquire about English language lessons, especially IELTS preparing classes. I have read about your language courses in the Telegram channel group and after reading the reviews I am absolutely sure that your knowledge and experience will help me to pass the exam. I would like to know about the availability of fast track courses because I booked for the exam on the 3rd of May. It would be interesting to know how the classes are going.

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would be grateful if you could tell me what the price is and how long could be the lessons. I work from 9.00 to 15.00, so after that time it would be fine. I would like to commence as soon as possible. You could send the above-mentioned information to my e-mail or fax. I look forward to receiving

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a prompt reply. Yours sincerely Zalina Kam

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

155 words

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You want to learn a language. There is a teacher near to where you live.write a letter to the teacher in the letter: say how you came to know about him/her, explain why you want to learn, ask whatbhelp the can offer

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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