Some people believe that one-on-one lessons are better for learning while other think that group lessons are superior. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Different types of classes could benefit
people
to learn better. While private lessons
seem better to some people
, others consider group
classes more advantageous. Personally, I believe both are equally beneficial and it depends on the course.
On the one
hand, one
-on-one
learning may boost learners’ progress. The tutor can focus on students’ weaknesses to improve them while in group
lessons
, everyone's needs should be considered. It is usually important for those who want to learn something in a short time. This
type of learning also
has the advantage of more practising which usually results in better comprehension. For example
, it is far more rational to have a private class to prepare for IELTS because the tutor can teach you exactly what you need to improve while if you attend a group
class, that will be impossible and it may negatively affect your progress.
On the other hand
, learning in groups could also
be beneficial at some points. Firstly
, it helps people
to have more communication which has a positive impact on their self-esteem. In today's world, people
need to improve their communication skills to progress and attending a group
lesson is one
of the best ways for that. Secondly
, many people
tend to procrastinate their learning if they want to participate in a private class while this
may not happen in group
one
because they probably feel responsible to their peers. This
type of learning is likely to be more appropriate for difficult lessons
or those in which they are less interested.
In conclusion, It seems to me that depending on the type of the course both one
-on-one
lessons
and group
classes are appropriate. The former is better to learn something quickly and improve one
's weaknesses while the latter is superior for communication skills and motivation.Submitted by Sarah_nazari on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite