the plans below shows the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. ( Task 1, cam 16 test 3)

The South West
airport
had some changes after its
redevelopment
. The departures area was modified to have a bag drop service, along with a cafe and check-in module that was already there before the
redevelopment
.
However
, both the cafe and the check-in module changed places to make room for the bag drop. After going through security passport control, passengers and
airport
staff will be able to purchase stuff at the new stores before their flight. After doing some shopping, the boarding
gates
are ahead. There are now 18
gates
, which were 8 before the
redevelopment
. For
this
reason, the walkaway installed between the
gates
has been replaced by a sky train, which will be able to transport people
withalong
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with long
with along
with a long
the different
gates
. But if you're not leaving the South West
airport
, you'll be glad to know the arrivals area has been redeveloped. After going through passport control customs, passengers and
airport
staff will be able to hire different services.
This
area was empty before the
redevelopment
, but now it has an ATM, a cafe and a car hire service that will gladly take you to your destination.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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