You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

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vaccination

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against common illnesses has been a never-ending debate. Some individuals opine that

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should not be vaccinated

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the well of their

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, whereas others think that governments should impose

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on

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.

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some might disagree with the

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view, I completely agree with it.

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is due to the fact that most

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do not have enough medical knowledge and governments should be responsible for

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with, most

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do not have the required medical knowledge to decide the best for their offspring. Owing to the fact that most of them surf the internet net to seek an answer to their

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's medical issues.

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, an article that has been published recently

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showed that 90% of

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tend to rely on the internet to find

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medical

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for their

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's difficulties rather than visiting doctors.

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, their medical opinion should not be trusted.

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, they should not make any medical decision that could lead to irreparable consequences in the future including immunising their

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. Because

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is part

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public

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, governments should be responsible for it. In light of fact that it is essential to

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interest.

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, hospitals do not have to treat as many

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with life-threatening conditions.

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, the more vaccinated

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, the more likely to gain

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herd immunity.

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, authorities have more resources to devote to

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than

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.

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, they can provide access to many

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care institutions. In

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regard, a healthy generation would be expected to support the nation's economy

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could increase the standard of living for many. In conclusion, the controversial topic

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making

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mandatory for

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never fails to attract public attention. I completely support the idea of imposing a mandatory

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on them as most of the

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do not have solid medical understanding and authorities should be responsible for

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's

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as a part of their public

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responsibilities.