You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence. You should write at least 250 words.

Children

's

vaccination

against common illnesses has been a never-ending debate. Some individuals opine that

children

should not be vaccinated

against

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the well of their

parents

, whereas others think that governments should impose

vaccination

on

children

.

Although

some might disagree with the

second

view, I completely agree with it.

This

is due to the fact that most

parents

do not have enough medical knowledge and governments should be responsible for

children

's

health

.

To begin

with, most

parents

do not have the required medical knowledge to decide the best for their offspring. Owing to the fact that most of them surf the internet net to seek an answer to their

children

's medical issues.

For instance

, an article that has been published recently

,

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showed that 90% of

parents

tend to rely on the internet to find

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medical

explanations

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for their

children

's difficulties rather than visiting doctors.

Thus

, their medical opinion should not be trusted.

Consequently

, they should not make any medical decision that could lead to irreparable consequences in the future including immunising their

children

. Because

children

's

health

is part

from

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public

health

, governments should be responsible for it. In light of fact that it is essential to

national

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interest.

For example

, hospitals do not have to treat as many

children

with life-threatening conditions.

In addition

, the more vaccinated

children

, the more likely to gain

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herd immunity.

Furthermore

, authorities have more resources to devote to

children

than

parents

.

For example

, they can provide access to many

health

care institutions. In

this

regard, a healthy generation would be expected to support the nation's economy

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could increase the standard of living for many. In conclusion, the controversial topic

concerning

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making

vaccination

mandatory for

children

never fails to attract public attention. I completely support the idea of imposing a mandatory

vaccination

on them as most of the

parents

do not have solid medical understanding and authorities should be responsible for

children

's

health

as a part of their public

health

responsibilities.