On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter in regards to
laptop
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the laptop
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i
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lost yesterday which was covered under
theft
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the theft
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insurance policy I took from your organization.My insurance reference number is wh573h.It was
samsung
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Samsung
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z200 special grey edition with 13 inches screen and
m1
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an m1
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chip
processer
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processor
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i
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have
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apply
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bought
this
laptop
from
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Samsung
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samsung
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samsung's
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offical
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official
website
last
month. Let me explain more, I was heading back from Paris after a short holiday.
Last
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time
i
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saw my
laptop
at the time of purchasing
airline
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an airline
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ticket from the ticket
conter
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counter
outside the main
enterance
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entrance
of airport gate number 1.After getting
ticket
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it come to my notice that my bag is missing it was in a blue leather
laptop
sleve
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sleeve
bag with my name engraved on it.I have searched everywhere
however
,not
able
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been able
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to find it. I would like you please send me the
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documentation
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documentations
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documentation
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required to claim insurance for
same
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the same
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and
also
let me know the processing time your company will take. Yours faithfully, Shekhar Chhabra
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  • thirdly
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  • moreover
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • valuable possession
  • insurance claim
  • misplace
  • irreplaceable
  • receipt
  • policyholder
  • reimbursement
  • coverage
  • claim number
  • deductible
  • documentation
  • authenticate
  • liability
  • premium
  • accidental loss
  • indemnity
  • beneficiary
  • contact details
  • substantiate
  • correspondence
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