On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

#holiday #item #travel #insurance #cost #manager #company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter in regards to

laptop

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the laptop

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lost yesterday which was covered under

theft

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the theft

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insurance policy I took from your organization.My insurance reference number is wh573h.It was

samsung

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Samsung

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z200 special grey edition with 13 inches screen and

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an m1

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chip

processer

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processor

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have

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apply

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bought

this

laptop

from

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Samsung

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samsung

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samsung's

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offical

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official

website

last

month. Let me explain more, I was heading back from Paris after a short holiday.

Last

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time

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saw my

laptop

at the time of purchasing

airline

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an airline

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ticket from the ticket

conter

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counter

outside the main

enterance

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entrance

of airport gate number 1.After getting

ticket

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the ticket

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it come to my notice that my bag is missing it was in a blue leather

laptop

sleve

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sleeve

bag with my name engraved on it.I have searched everywhere

however

,not

able

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been able

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to find it. I would like you please send me the

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documentation

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documentations

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documentation

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required to claim insurance for

same

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the same

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and

also

let me know the processing time your company will take. Yours faithfully, Shekhar Chhabra

Submitted by chhabra.shekhar on Wed Apr 20 2022

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secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
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therefore
however
although
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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
22Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

163 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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