On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter: • Describe the item you lost • Explain how you lost it. • Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter in regards to

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laptop

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the laptop

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lost yesterday which was covered under

theft

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the theft

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insurance policy I took from your organization.My insurance reference number is wh573h.It was

samsung

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Samsung

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z200 special grey edition with 13 inches screen and

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an m1

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chip

processer

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processor

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have

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apply

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bought

this

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laptop

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from

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Samsung

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samsung

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samsung's

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offical

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official

website

last

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month. Let me explain more, I was heading back from Paris after a short holiday.

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Last

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The last

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time

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saw my

laptop

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at the time of purchasing

airline

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an airline

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ticket from the ticket

conter

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counter

outside the main

enterance

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entrance

of airport gate number 1.After getting

ticket

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the ticket

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it come to my notice that my bag is missing it was in a blue leather

laptop

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sleve

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sleeve

bag with my name engraved on it.I have searched everywhere

however

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,not

able

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to find it. I would like you please send me the

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documentation

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documentations

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documentation

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required to claim insurance for

same

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the same

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and

also

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let me know the processing time your company will take. Yours faithfully, Shekhar Chhabra

Submitted by chhabra.shekhar on Wed Apr 20 2022

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

163 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

valuable possession
insurance claim
misplace
irreplaceable
receipt
policyholder
reimbursement
coverage
claim number
deductible
documentation
authenticate
liability
premium
accidental loss
indemnity
beneficiary
contact details
substantiate
correspondence

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