Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think that they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People

have different opinions on

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whether

youngsters should keep their traditions or not. Regarding

this

, some assert that

people

have

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rights

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right

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to act freely.

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essay will outline both aspects and suggest my view. On the one hand, some

people

argue that

people

have to behave regarding their

cultures

as it is

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factor in keeping their national identities. due to globalization, the boundaries between

countries

became blurred, and

therefore

some superpowers'

cultures

dominate minor

countries

'

cultures

.

As a result

, some nations are losing their

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languages

,

and

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along with their

cultures

.

For example

, recent media reports that almost one language is disappearing once in two weeks in contemporary society. As the

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clearly illustrates, keeping tradition is essential to keep a language and culture, thereby protecting their national identities from disappearing.

On the other hand

, in

this

domestic world, individuals have

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the authorities

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authorities

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to behave what they want unless it is

illigal

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illegal

, and it brings about more chances to

develope

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develop

. Some strict

cultures

in certain

countries

have harsh

regulation

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regulations

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for women.

Therefore

they cannot express their opinions or thinking.

For instance

, some

countries

ban women from studying since these women are looked down

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their society.

Therefore

, if it had been for the free

of

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expression among these

people

, they would have had

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to study and live a free life,

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contributing to reducing the gap between females and males. In conclusion, while I accept that following tradition is sometimes can be meaningful,

but

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there is no doubt that expressing own opinion is more important for the

next

generation. I hope children can learn what they want regardless

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of ages

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ages

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in the future.