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Some people believe it is best to speak while others believe writing is better way of communication. Do you agree or disagree?

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there are different ideas about what is the best
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 to communicate, some
people
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 believe that speech is a better
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 to communicate than writing,
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, I think writing can be an excellent
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 to communicate in special situations, but, I think always speak can ba better
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 to transition their idea. On the one
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 side, when
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 decide to interact with other communities throughout the world chat can be a good choice, because, the public can transfer their opinion via writing a message,
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 matter not only can higher their confidence but
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 they mean is very understandable for them, there is not any limitation for communicating with a society that lives around the world,
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, if
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 say with a different language, they can use a translator to convert their text,
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,
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 able to write content in their language and other
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 in another country can convert that to their language.
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 side, interaction through of face to face can improve
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's communication,
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, when the public is very comfortable when they decided to write, speech is a very better
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 to communicate and when we have eye contact with them, we can transition their means to another person, and
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 type of communication can have good results on other
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 that want to join with us, as we can see many of friendships relation are formed when we have direct communication. In conclusion, communicating through writing may be easy and we can able to communicate with anyone throughout the world, but I believe that interacting with
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 in the form of face-to-face is very impressive.
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