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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

#food #drink #products #levels #sugar #health #people
Since
people
 prefer the sweet taste during eating the food,
then
 the company produce the
products
 with a surplus level of
sugar
. It is argued that the
price
 of sweet
products
 should be decreased to let
people
 eat less
sugar
. I completely agree with the statements,
This
 essay will substantiate my opinion in the paragraphs below.
To begin
 with, the
first
 reason is
sugar
 is a detrimental mixture that built physical health harmful among the population. Increasing the
price
 of sweet food and drinks should decrease the chance to grasp the
products
 on the market shelves into carts.
For example
, in developing countries, middle-income folks still consider the cost of the product as a priority when they are shopping. They prefer to buy the product at a lower
price
.
Secondly
, most unresponsible factories add excessively high rates of sugars into their
products
. It can create a phenomenon of
sugar
-addicted in society. Dangerous diseases
such
 as diabetes, heart disease or high blood pressure are derived from the high
sugar
 levels
people
 take in the body.
For example
, one of my young friends has got diabetes since 25 years old because he likes to consume sugary drinks and foodstuff prior to another type of cuisine. In a nutshell, increasing the
price
 of
sugar
products
 is one of the factors that can reduce the risk of ailments in societies.
However
, the council should consider increasing the base ingredients for making
sugar
 as well as encouraging
people
 to do outdoor activities. Those are the things that can help to prevent occurring sickness in the communities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • sugary products
  • excessive sugar consumption
  • discourage
  • promote
  • healthier choices
  • reduce
  • increased taxes
  • fund
  • health education
  • prevention programs
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