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The graph illustrates the data over a period of two years on the works
about
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 humanities and social sciences
disciplines
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. According to the chart, English related careers
was
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 the most popular among 5 jobs, while the others had some variations in the figures. There was a steady decrease in the
numbers
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 of
the
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English related jobs, falling from 1200 in 2012 to nearly 900 in 2014,
although
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 it remained the most popular work during the whole period. Quantities of people who worked in history showed a slight fall over the two year period, from just over 700 to under 600.
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Furthermore
, the graph of philosophy
disciplines
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 represented a fluctuation, but
finally
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 showed a downward trend, in which the number of employees reduced from slightly more than 700 to 600.
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, there was a gradual growth of the workers who had jobs in
communication
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 area, which had an increase of approximately 200. The least popular career was sociology
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disciplines
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, which remained the lowest number of careers between 2012 and 2014, from nearly 500 to 600. Overall, the data suggest that philosophy would be the career
that is
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 most unstable, and
disciplines
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 of communication would increase in the future graph.
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