Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
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always ought to improve themselves.
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, they do not work hard or try to change the situation they are not comfortable with since they see the obstacles and feel they are out of control. As a consequence, they end up doing the job they are not interested in which leads them to low Linking Words
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