Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Although
it is commonly believed that it is better to admit a situation
which
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is not satisfying
such
as
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unpleasant work or low finance, others consider that it is always best to develop
such
circumstances. In my opinion, I consider that no matter what stage of
life
a person is standing,
people
always ought to improve themselves. On the one hand, it is thought by some that individuals should accept any unpleasant situation they are in
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, or
in other words
, they leave themselves to
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destiny;
hence
, they do not work hard or try to change the situation they are not comfortable with since they see the obstacles and feel they are out of control. As a consequence, they end up doing the job they are not interested in which leads them to low
performane
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performance
in the workforce and
then
they will probably face
shortage
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of income too.
Nevertheless
, destiny is a small part of each person's
life
and each
individuals
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are
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in control
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in-control
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of their journey
of
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life
.
On the other hand
, it is considered by others that,
people
should always seek to develop their
existance
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existence
.
Furthermore
, to improve family welfare and reduce issues to promote comfort. To elaborate, when someone
do
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the job they want and they
passionate
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about with a good salary
this
peovides
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provides
a
gurantee
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guarantee
and reduces stress.
For instance
, failure in the workforce or
to have
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financial issues could lead to depression and anxiety.
Consequently
, to live a pleasant family improvement is essential for the
people
as well as society.
Thus
, it is evident promotion is necessary for all sole. In conclusion, while
people
may vary in their opinions, I think they are the captain of their ship;
therefore
, they have to always search for improvement and high-quality
life
.
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